Bitter Secrets, Raw Draft

This is the unedited version of Bitter Secrets that was written in front of and shared with readers on Patreon.

Eagle-eyed readers will catch the changes in dialogue, sequence of events, and scenes that were added/expanded during rewrites. For those interested in story development or who would like to compare a first draft to the final, this is what mine looks like.

* This manuscript is 12k words shorter than the final version that was published.